Thursday, December 29, 2011

The Dead Bride Comments

Rating: 5.0

He slambed her to the wall, pinning her shoulders against it
'Do you hear me? ! ' He shouts at her,
The dear bride, wouldn't answer his call,
He raised the knive slowly to her neck, slightly cutting it.
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Samantha Rose Turner
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izzy Barnwell 29 December 2011

Scary...I love writing ghost stories maybe you should too.Everybody me and Samantha are writing a poem or maybe a few to get people to stop smoking.....could you please send me a message if you want to help.

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Buxton Shippy 29 December 2011

A well composed poem with vivid imagery and clarity of thought...I love it.

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Samantha Rose Turner

Samantha Rose Turner

New Castle, PA
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