The Dead Comments

Some amazing imagery here! These lines caught my imagination by the throat! lol while your sphincter does it's last duty better than I ever could. It drinks as it slaughters and laughs There is so much in this poem to both admire and fear, but Tai is no scaredy cat and can take any mushing you offer up. Keep writing my dear poet. Fear has a way of waking the Dead within us! All is perceived in the meadow of our minds eye. Drenched in fear when our lives become unclear! But don't worry, it is just fear and will disappear as time will tell another story. smiling at you Tai, submitting to the dark side of my moon!