Monday, January 20, 2003

The Daze Comments

Rating: 4.0

It was one of those mornings the earth seemed
not to have had any rest at all, her face dour
and unrefreshed, no particular place-- subway,
park-- expressed sufficient interest in present circumstances
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Mary Ruefle
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Terence Craddock 04 August 2023

loved the shifting movement of commonplace to insight rare imagery, in a day daze poem drifting through slumber morning half waking, a day semi sleep walking, to a potential night daze doze sleep seeking

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2023

Wonderful poem with captivating images. Very engaging!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 November 2017

Such a brilliant write, Mary... congrats for being chosen.....10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

When the moon came out and glowed like a night light loose in its socket, no one was captious, cautious or wise, though the toes of a few behaved strangely in bed- Wow beautiful lines, so nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. 10+++

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Reliving the events of the day or dreaming of what will come tomorrow..nice poem.. a ten..dreams do record and haunt..

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2017

This is a beautiful poetry about the intricacies in the morning hours. Congrats.

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Paul Brookes 07 November 2017

This is a dream-scape of the best kind as you wander in the night restless in strange lands where nothing as it seems until waking unrefreashed to the dawn feeling dazed. The imagery used is vivid and the strange metaphors compliment the dream like quality of the writing This a is a deserved poem of the day well written and concise tight writing Congratulations much deserved.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

Interesting write. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 November 2016

Loved reading this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. And of course, congrats on being selected poet of the day! - Unnikrishnan E S

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Bill Cantrell 07 November 2016

A pleasure to read this wonderful work

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Dorina Neculce 07 November 2016

Please pray for the florist Marieko who wraps roses in a paper cone then punches the wrong code. very nice

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Dorina Neculce 07 November 2016

When the moon came out and glowed like a night light loose in its socket, no one was captious, cautious or wise,

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 07 November 2016

A beautiful poem.Congratulation being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Seamus O Brian 07 November 2016

So colorfully inventive. A jaunty ride to nowhere, each bump and jostle engagingly enjoyable.

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Earnest Gatuma 07 November 2016

Simply flourishing, amazing and beautiful.....

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Partha Pratim Goswami 07 November 2016

I find it most unconventional and extraordinary.Beautiful piece of creation

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 November 2016

In its socket! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mary Ruefle

Mary Ruefle

Allegheny County, Pennsylvania
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