It was one of those mornings the earth seemed
not to have had any rest at all, her face dour
and unrefreshed, no particular place-- subway,
park-- expressed sufficient interest in present circumstances
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Wonderful poem with captivating images. Very engaging!
Such a brilliant write, Mary... congrats for being chosen.....10++++
When the moon came out and glowed like a night light loose in its socket, no one was captious, cautious or wise, though the toes of a few behaved strangely in bed- Wow beautiful lines, so nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. 10+++
Reliving the events of the day or dreaming of what will come tomorrow..nice poem.. a ten..dreams do record and haunt..
This is a beautiful poetry about the intricacies in the morning hours. Congrats.
This is a dream-scape of the best kind as you wander in the night restless in strange lands where nothing as it seems until waking unrefreashed to the dawn feeling dazed. The imagery used is vivid and the strange metaphors compliment the dream like quality of the writing This a is a deserved poem of the day well written and concise tight writing Congratulations much deserved.
Interesting write. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Loved reading this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. And of course, congrats on being selected poet of the day! - Unnikrishnan E S
Please pray for the florist Marieko who wraps roses in a paper cone then punches the wrong code. very nice
When the moon came out and glowed like a night light loose in its socket, no one was captious, cautious or wise,
A beautiful poem.Congratulation being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
So colorfully inventive. A jaunty ride to nowhere, each bump and jostle engagingly enjoyable.
I find it most unconventional and extraordinary.Beautiful piece of creation
loved the shifting movement of commonplace to insight rare imagery, in a day daze poem drifting through slumber morning half waking, a day semi sleep walking, to a potential night daze doze sleep seeking