The Days Of... Comments

This sounds very much like the beginning of a song! I wish it had continued, are you up for bribes? Lovely write, my dear, so I am sprinkling an orchestra of stars all over it! and a fav as well

Great memories with compelling images.

What a wonderful poem so beautifully expressed! ! !

Very well crafted poem with appropriate rhymes and memoirs.

Nicely crafted with appropriate rhymes and good memoirs.

Made a re today. Enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm.Thank you, Becca

There's a beautiful rhythmic flow to this wonderful poem. It brings back memories of children playing hop scotch. Rebecca, thanks for the memories. Excuse me, while I eat some blueberries, so that I remember to revisit this poem.

A nice rendition, with cherished memories.5 stars.

Raspberries, mushrooms and blueberries- all my favourites together woven into a string of a poem full of cherished memories. Marvellous poem dear Becca.....10

Nice memories

I see a different Becca in this poem. A rebirth in poetry!

Hi Becca, beautiful, great memories and excellently rendered. Top score.

Great memories, Nicely expressed 5*****

So beautiful that it rendered me speechless