The Days Of The Rat Comments

Wonderful story of absorbing interest...! . May be that I have a child's heart (?) that I am able to enjoy it so much... Pretty sure, this highly rhyming poem will interest any one who reads it... I award you a10! Thank you Rajesh for your latest comments on my poems and welcome back!

Thank you Dimitri, Tiku and Edwards for having read the poem and liked it.

i give this a 97% rating. and i send it to MyPoemList. it's a nice story for one of your children's books. is it? i especially enjoyed the following lines: Those days of the rats were the days of their charm When no living creature could even think of doing them harm. Groaning in pain he once again bit a rat And was once again surprised to find him flat. So, he bit the ones who attacked him first Those were the creatures that fared the worst. The jungle in joy ruptured with sounds The goats and the dogs danced with hands held around. scene/scene is ok. stayed/stray is a good try but i bet you could make it better. overall i found the rhyming to be exceptional and very entertaining. the story is almost magnificent. thanks for sharing.

hilarious! ! that's why the cat chase a rat! ! liked the way you put it.wonderful poetry.

Great poem story. Well writen and great to read. Good job

Thank you Nasarudheen for having liked the poem. You may go through my poem ' Ode to Shakespeare' which I have entered for the poetry contest. Looking forward for your constructive thoughts and opinion.

A very good narrative with satiric sense.