The Days Of... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

The Days Of...

Rating: 5.0


Walking out in the woods, where
the raspberries grew. Picking
mushrooms and blueberries too.
Oh how I cherish, those times with
you! .. Under the skies, of such
beautiful hue...

Wednesday, June 22, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
And peaceful evenings reading together Blueberries for Sal, too.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Made a re today. Enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm.Thank you, Becca

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Richard Wlodarski 25 June 2022

There's a beautiful rhythmic flow to this wonderful poem. It brings back memories of children playing hop scotch. Rebecca, thanks for the memories. Excuse me, while I eat some blueberries, so that I remember to revisit this poem.

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Okim Otu 24 June 2022

A nice rendition, with cherished memories.5 stars.

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Raspberries, mushrooms and blueberries- all my favourites together woven into a string of a poem full of cherished memories. Marvellous poem dear Becca.....10

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Michael Cochrane 23 June 2022

Nice memories

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Susan Williams 19 March 2023

This sounds very much like the beginning of a song! I wish it had continued, are you up for bribes? Lovely write, my dear, so I am sprinkling an orchestra of stars all over it! and a fav as well

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2022

Great memories with compelling images.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2022

What a wonderful poem so beautifully expressed! ! !

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Nabakishore Dash 25 June 2022

Very well crafted poem with appropriate rhymes and memoirs.

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Nabakishore Dash 25 June 2022

Nicely crafted with appropriate rhymes and good memoirs.

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