The Daybreak Comments

In stanza 6 we find the exotic views of boughs of arching trees blooming in colourful hues. The stanza 7 puts spotlight on the gradual emergence of moon ensuring serene peace...The last stanza is the thread that knits the garland! While reviewing this elegant piece of poetry, I find a lot of joy! Hope many readers would find the work quite enjoyable! A great piece of work!

In stanza 4 we notice a lovely scene of innocent doves coming out from their close covet. We find a very rich description of Lovely groves and gorgeous gardens. Moreover, ‘Buzz with the hum of Bumble bees’, ‘The agile squirrels with bushy tails’ are all lively descriptions ….(cont..)

This is a poem of eight stanzas (all rhyme stanzas make it lyrical) ! I find a smooth liquid movement from top to bottom! The fist stanza depicts the beauty of the distant mountain basking in the glittering rays of sun while the second stanza brings animate effect of chirping birds in the woods ‘The green woods echo the song of birds’ leaving a remarkable scene of the evening where everything is gradually settling down (stanza 3) ..

Back to life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Are we all so lucky with sunrise every day your poem is akin to a camera that presents it for our eyes with a perfect last line With man and beast, so richly blessed...thanks and regards

Singing the beauty of glorious sunrise, the Daybreak is a marvelous write.

A beauty fell from the high hills and flowing on the plains of the hearts like a teen jumping on a rope..........10

Glorious imagery. Only the gifted eye of poet can see and appreciate the intricate beauties of morning, and share them in such a unique way. Wonderful.

A brilliant glow illumines the earth And the spell of darkness - come to cease Casting the cover of snowy mantle The morn has emerged in serene peace ************** Wow! ! ! this's the beauty, this poem has e'erything! ! ! Such a glorious poem: : : : : Birds that leave their nocturnal haunts Dart to heaven's measureless bounds: : : **** I like these lines.....amazin'! ! ! ! ! ! !

Beautiful poem, a great description of nature, and so very well written.

Wow! They look so exotic to view Bright with the touch of morning dew///// nicely presented poem.. quite knowledgeable hand hand with brilliance...10 what a fantastic show from tree all fruits laden over it for free as if knowledge imparted is with no strings birds gather message and beautifully sing

A really wonderful poem really like it. A fantastic poem.