Tuesday, October 18, 2005

The Day, You Made Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day my eyes started to wander was the day you walked by.
You took me heart the day I fell in love with you.
When you made me feel was the day I truly felt.
The day you made me weak was the day I kissed you.
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Lynn samantha
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Brian Jani 05 May 2014

nice one Lynn

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Collin C 11 February 2006

Agrees. Gave it a ten.

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Steffi Webster 20 October 2005

It is a good poem and I like it alot. Brill.

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