Thursday, April 19, 2007

The Day You Made Me Cry Comments

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There are days when I look into your eyes
That had tears rolling inside of mines
I can’t help but to feel so insecure
Fearing my biggest fear
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Reggie fambro mcclain III
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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 27 February 2009

It sure does make you think. Style was good, words were great..id give it a 10. Nice piece

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 March 2008

the skies is dark.................lovely piece.

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Amie-Lee ...... 25 March 2008

I agree. A very moving poem. Keep up the good work.

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Angel of Darkness 21 November 2007

This poem hit home. It made me cry the 1st time I read it. It's like you looked into my heart and wrote down what you saw, this is how I feel with my bf (well ex bf now) He has such a hard time telling me how he felt about me, he broke up with me the 20th...he said he wasn't ready for a serious relationship....ne ways great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! XOXO, Kolee

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Xanadu Trevino 29 June 2007

every poem that i have read yjou wirte so far some how gets to me..... you are a gerat writer.... keep it up... i wish you were to go on keep writing aobut love like you do.... your poems fit the soul so well.... -Xanadu-

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Nakesha Banks 19 April 2007

i feel like you read my thoughts, and wrote them down. i feel like this about my boyfriend sometimes but i dont know how to tell him that he makes me feel like that he has a hard time expressing how he feels sometimes to, he'd rather put in a text messege lol anyway good job

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