Sunday, November 27, 2016

The Day You Left Comments

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The day you left
Life has deserted me
All the days were colorless
Evenings were all odorless
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abhilasha bhatt
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Akhtar Jawad 30 November 2016

A very impressive and touching poem...........................................

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The Preacher 30 November 2016

Voice of a broken heart! Fabulous lines :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 November 2016

Odorless! ! Loneliness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 27 November 2016

Detachment is not that easy yet in life things move on.....10++++

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Mithilesh Yadav 27 November 2016

Painful...... Heart touching......... Pain is penned with all your heart.... Thanx for sharing

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