Saturday, May 2, 2009

The Day Will Come Comments

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In the next world a day will come,
When a beautiful but unhappy being will come,
Her darkness will hide the loving sun.
Some will hide, but other will rejose,
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 June 2010

but i think it would be better if light shall rule... anyway, well penned

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Now we may rest in peace, our bodys will burn the world will exploed. But at lest thanks to this girl with her flames of death. We will meet the goddess nyx in her world of loving darkness.' the perfect imagination for the future of tomorrow...lovely i like it...10 read mine you go alone and yes to to..what is tomorrow

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Ershad Mazumder 03 May 2009

It is really very poetic. After a long time I read a poem. Thanks Emoly.

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