Wednesday, June 17, 2009

The Day When I Died Comments

Rating: 5.0

do you feel my pulse? cos i don't
check my heartbeat, cos beating it won't
my breath has stopped, i got no more air
and i'm all numb, the feeling's not there
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Sneha Murali
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I Am Charlie 18 June 2009

Nice. Like that casual beat.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

Very touching

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touching feeling in a wonderful scary dream..well expressed..enjoyed all and last part most...that sure caused a hurt.....

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rago rago 18 June 2009

dream and when it was found dream let it be true....... entined and beautiful write....

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