Thursday, July 9, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The Day The World Ended Comments

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when did madness of my eyes
melted to a quiver …. fell off my lips

when did your longing
...
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Rehan Hyder
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Kasia Fedyk 24 May 2012

You are very welcome! Beautifully written in one breath, profound expression. Thank you!

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rago rago 21 July 2009

what to comment........ when did I cease to exist........... wonderful write....

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Yelena M. 13 July 2009

...when did I cease to exist and became errata a disclaimer in every syllable.... My goodness, this is such a Strong expression...like the rest of your lines actually.10++ Thanks for sharing. A.

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Aamnah Akhtar 10 July 2009

the places spin, the faces merge, the walls divide, the world gets interiorized...

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