Saturday, September 16, 2006

The Day She Began To Write For Herself Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Stage Was Set
Preparation Was Done
Lines Were Written
They Would Please, She Was Certain.
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Nikunj Parikh 05 April 2007

nice poem.......i should learn to wirte for myself....keep it up! !

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John Tiong Chunghoo 31 March 2007

wow great lesson. somewhere there. must be there.

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Risha : Ahmed 08 January 2007

A very beautiful poem and I think I can relate to it in my own way. Love........Risha

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Lee Degnan 26 October 2006

Preets, very interesting style... it was as if every line could've been the headline in a newspaper... uplifting and empowering! ~Lee

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Sheena Dhanaraj 19 September 2006

Hey Preeths, Is this autobiographical? You are very talented, and you have developed a new style especially with the presentation (The first caps on most words) . This poem conjures up exact emotions. I like the flow. Regards Sheena (P.S. - Thanks for your comments)

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Asma Bahrainwala 18 September 2006

hey preets... this is so true... nice write.. keep it up...

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Nalini Hebbar 17 September 2006

preets...great poem...exactly what i feel too...i too write for myself...love...nalini

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 September 2006

Splendid Write, young lady...You continue to write awestriking verse''''''''''''''''FJR

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Catastrophe King 16 September 2006

That was really nice. It has the innocense.... a feel of freshness. You are really maturing your pen fast... I admire, sure do! I loved the way you set up the stage with those well placed words. I am sure this was from your heart! A well deserved 10.. I do not forget to vote.

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