Monday, June 9, 2008

The Day Of The Dead Comments

Rating: 4.5

The beat bangs heavy on the gravestones.
It’s time to live, so they hear the deep heartbeats,
of the Mardi gras so its time to get up.
Flat laid concrete coffins, slowly open beneath a safe moon ray.
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Greenwolfe 1962 09 August 2008

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It is well worth the time because it has some fine work within it. It is also very creative and interesting. It is something new and enjoyable. A delightful read. GW62

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Mark Swaine

Mark Swaine

Blackpool, Lancashire, U.K.
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