'Kokrookoo' was the rude awakening at dawn
From a strange rooster I never heard before
'Tweet Tweet' the little birds from outside chirped in
'Ooooo' I sighed, not another boring work day
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Ronald, the sounds of nature blended well into this lovely poem. It keeps the reader reading as they are played out. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
it was a very visual poem...so sweet..i think everyone feels that way
Sensual and sensitive. I heard the sounds and the feelings. Great piece, Ronald. Sir Jasper
yes this poem is different, yet original, gave you a 10..you and i almost have the same, but different style of poem writing, please check out my 2 new latest, naive, and she will never