Tuesday, July 14, 2009

The Day Nature Sang A Love Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Kokrookoo' was the rude awakening at dawn
From a strange rooster I never heard before
'Tweet Tweet' the little birds from outside chirped in
'Ooooo' I sighed, not another boring work day
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Ronald Doku
COMMENTS
Kristina B; Williams 18 July 2009

yes this poem is different, yet original, gave you a 10..you and i almost have the same, but different style of poem writing, please check out my 2 new latest, naive, and she will never

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Obinna Eruchie 16 July 2009

A nice poem with a bright tone.

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David Harris 15 July 2009

Ronald, the sounds of nature blended well into this lovely poem. It keeps the reader reading as they are played out. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Azcuena Acosta 15 July 2009

it was a very visual poem...so sweet..i think everyone feels that way

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Sir Jasper 15 July 2009

Sensual and sensitive. I heard the sounds and the feelings. Great piece, Ronald. Sir Jasper

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