Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Wednesday, December 24, 2025

The Day My Name Was Ben Comments

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One day as I walked through the mall,
I met a man who was quite tall.
His face lit up. 'How are you, Ben?
I ain't seen you since who knows when! '
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Kim Barney 27 December 2025

I discovered that somehow, the first two lines of this poem were missing! I have added them, and they are showing up now.

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Isadora Quagmire 25 December 2025

What a hilarious story! ! ! This poem made me laugh! ! ! Excellently penned! Thank you so much for sharing this!

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Kim Barney 27 December 2025

Thank you for the comment, Isadora.

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Timber Koleden 25 December 2025

What an amusing story! You tell it so skillfully, with such well crafted rhythm and rhyme! You make such excellent poems--I always feel priviledged to read them! Well crafted; it made me feel light-hearted! Merry Christmas to you!

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Kim Barney 27 December 2025

Thank you, Timber, for the comment.

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Belle Wassermeister 24 December 2025

This is hilarious! It's just like Hank to not tell the man who he was! Still laughing!

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Kim Barney 27 December 2025

Thanks, Belle. I'll tell Hank you said that.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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