The Day My Name Was Ben Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

The Day My Name Was Ben

Rating: 5.0

One day as I walked through the mall,
I met a man who was quite tall.
His face lit up. 'How are you, Ben?
I ain't seen you since who knows when! '

Now, I'm not Ben; my name is Kim,
but that I'll not reveal to him.
He is so happy, joy no end.
He thinks he's found a long-lost friend.

'How is your wife? '

'Oh, she's just fine.
She spends a lot of time online.
She orders dresses, shoes and such.
Sometimes I think she spends too much,
but I don't scold her. She's a dear,
and fills my life with so much cheer.
Well, I must go now; you take care,
and we'll meet up again somewhere.'

And so I sent him on his way,
with hopes he'll see his Ben some day.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is based on a true story, except that it happened to my friend Darwin Henry (Hank) Beuning. Hank never did tell the man that he was not Ben. I told Hank that he should write a poem about it, but since he is locked out of Poem Hunter, I decided to write it myself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isadora Quagmire 25 December 2025

What a hilarious story! ! ! This poem made me laugh! ! ! Excellently penned! Thank you so much for sharing this!

0 0 Reply
Timber Koleden 25 December 2025

What an amusing story! You tell it so skillfully, with such well crafted rhythm and rhyme! You make such excellent poems--I always feel priviledged to read them! Well crafted; it made me feel light-hearted! Merry Christmas to you!

0 0 Reply
Belle Wassermeister 24 December 2025

This is hilarious! It's just like Hank to not tell the man who he was! Still laughing!

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Close
Error Success