Saturday, July 16, 2011

The Day My Life Came Alive Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see her when she’s working
What an awesome sight
I can’t wait for the time
When I’ll get to hold her tight
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Ray Hansell
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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