The Day My Father Died Comments
I saw him in the fields today
With two horses and a plough
I Waved at him and said hello
And he just mopped his brow
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Beautiful tribute to your dad Mary.Well done really terrific poem
your intense love for your father made you see his apparition. a great write indeed, Mary.10/10.
You saw him trudging through the muddy furrows and came home when your sister said that your dad had died. It is unclear how! Isn't 'him' of your poem and your dad the same person?
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7/27/2025 9:39:29 AM # 1.0.0
Beautifully done. I love this. I will read more of your poems.