The Day Is Too Short But So Is The Night Comments
They are not long, the dark hours of the night,
Red fire once blue will smoke against the sun;
Slow and steady is the advent of light.
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You put this togather quite well. I like 3 line stanzas and the last stanza was 4 lines and you made it work well. This poem to me was sort of like inspiration in darknes that all things shall pass.
Great poem, you create each lines with very delicate and very careful to ensure the poem can stand as a powerful poem..keep write thanks for inviting me_Unwritten soul
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7/18/2025 8:41:05 AM # 1.0.0
Great poetry. I fell in love with it quite easily