The Day Is Done Comments

Absolutely beautiful poem. I'm sorry for your loss x

...joys and sorrows interwoven in human life.... it is an inspiring piece of writing

He is not gone far as you think When silence and solitude calls You will find him stand and wink In the corridors of your mind standing tall......... Very good poem and welcome to my page for your valuable comments

A heartfelt write Valerie and a beautiful, beautiful poem.

The day is done but love and memories still remains. I felt your deeply emotional write but I also feel a ray of bright hope for you. It may be dark now but the light will conquer it. You will overcome! A heartfelt write.

A special poem for someone special with sad tender thoughts and sweet acceptance of Divine will

Treasured memories will always be with you Val.

Please remember all the pleasant times you had together. Your lines in parenthesis refer to yellow flowers. Please read my poem 'Five Yellow Butterflies' as they fly away. Thank you.

Another beautiful poem Val. I don't know what else to say.

A wonderful tribute to your loved one. God bless.

Dear Valerie, my apologies for coming late to your requiem piece. This apparently most stoic and beautiful tribute is a finely crafted and special poem. My thoughts are with you.

Surely one of the finest tributes ever penned; beautiful.

my condolences lovely poem....

Your sorrow has solidified into a beautiful poem Val... more poignant and penetrating than poems we write on an imagined situation! We all know how hard it is for you now... yet Time can heal the wound though the scar may remain! But coming back to your poems is the best way to release the pent up feelings of ache! May you get the strength to tide over this loss!

a very emotional poem to read Val. We all know words will fall short to console you, as losing a dear one is not easy to sail thru, but good people are very few, who are called by God to reside in his heavenly dew.

All your dear thoughts will ever be alive with the thoughts of late Mr Dohren giving you all the wherewithal to cross these waves which have caused a temporary adversity in your life. Valerie, we are all here together for the bright days to come..

Deepest sympathies. A beautiful poem written with great pain and tenderness.

Val, I am so sorry to have read this, yet he is out of pain now and I send my deepest condolences... This here is a beautifully written poem of deep sadness, and may you continue to bless us with your gifted words. {{{hugs}}}

A beautiful tribute to a loved one lost. Please accept my deepest sympathy.

you are our angel ma'am and god is always close to angels so there is nothing to wish for you cause you have HIM by your side.. take care love you