Sunday, June 8, 2008

The Day I Went To The Beach Comments

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It was another day,
I went to the beach,
there I could feel the wind breeze right through me,
not many people were there,
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lee sharon
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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 June 2008

i love children's poetry because they make such natural read. good efforts sharon. keep on.

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