Wednesday, September 10, 2008

The Day I Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whether by cries of wheels
Or by smoke of gun
My transportation be
Peter is the name I wish I greet
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Didier Sixte Kahungu
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 11 September 2008

beautiful! I like the words, Whether, and how you wrote them. very brilliant! keep writing! could you read and comment on my new poems too? by the way, could you speak French, Didier?

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008

This poem is really wonderful....well structured; though too long...10

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