Sunday, March 30, 2008

The Day I Died Comments

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Take a breath, it'll be your last,
today we venture into my past.
The day my world was all but dry.
This is the day that I would die.
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Jesse Bauer
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Abha Sharma 30 March 2008

beautiful imagery of those last moment... No one hears you, just the fish. Bubbles rise as your one last wish. well written.

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Missoula, MT
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