The day I answered your call
Was the day that ended it all
I heard your voice… and then a stall
“We need to talk, ” is when the tears started to fall
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i believe also when in the situation such as that i usually come to the conclusion that love is a sick game & tons of BS. That was a wonderfully written poem. & ive felt almost exactly like that before. Wonderful Job :) Your A Great Poet, Keep it up. Much Love. Shelby Marie.
i loved it so much Brittany it was wonderful. well done.
THIS POEM IS SOOO....SAD.....AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY YOU! ... i like it a lot....specially the first para.....keep writing such beautiful poems.. as 'this is how i feel about life' said, love will lead to a lot of pain, but it will never die.... i myself hated love before, because it brought along with it a lot of sadness and tears and fears, ....but that was because it wasnt true love...when true love shows itself to us....we will no longer have to cry... you will find a person worth your every tear...but the fascinating part is that you will never hev to cry when you have this love with you.. take care Nia
a like this poem nice love poetry love always turns to pain ALWAYS
love leads to hurt and pain...but love can never die
Love sucks and i know how you feel just keep going with your feelings and the poem is good keep writing.