Saturday, June 15, 2019

The Day I Cease To Be Comments

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The day I cease to be

With tinged clouds and floating wings,
The gleaming flickering flame receding
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Prabir Gayen
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Anjandev Roy 18 June 2019

Wonderful imagery. Unique representation. Thanks. anjandev roy.

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Billy Loving 15 June 2019

Fierce imagery, resonates - Sounds as though you have given up on life and are just awaiting death.

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C F 15 June 2019

Beautiful words... but I am grappling with why you want to exchange " the joy of beautiful dreams and visions" with death. To live is at least better than never to have lived at all.

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Prabir Gayen 15 June 2019

Very thankful dear friend....poet ////

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