Tuesday, July 11, 2017

The Day He Cried Comments

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She came to him one day and said
That She wished to fly
He met her gaze and shook his head
And begged her not to try
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Persephone Springs
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Simone Inez Harriman 17 July 2017

A beautiful poem of a free spirit. How often people are held back from their dreams from those who suppress or doubt them. This one goes into my favorites. Thank you Persephone.

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Rajnish Manga 17 July 2017

An amazing narrative befitting the lesson carried by the poem- Make up your mind and you can do whatever you want in life. Very motivating piece of poetry. Thanks. I quote: @@ An oath, She made, to herself to see / The stars She would explore @@ She tried again and again / She glided, majestically, here and there

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Tom Allport 11 July 2017

a brilliant poem of free will set free ready to wander and make a new home? .............well written.

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Endless thanks

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