Tuesday, September 5, 2017

The Day Hast Gone Comments

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- - The day hast gone - -

The Sun hast set down the line spreading hue,
The flowers were swaying it's tiny Uproar,
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Prabir Gayen
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Prabir Kumar 26 May 2020

Upon thy bosom will I lie with no breath, dreaming the starry night that shoots the earth. ....

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Prabir Kumar 26 May 2020

The Sun hast set down the line spreading hue, The flowers were swaying it's tiny Uproar, The cattles were grazing on the Pasture, beside an undee beach with warm Splendor

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Michael Walker 22 July 2019

A very successful English sonnet (or Shakespearean) . You have got the form just right. I love the evening twilight, when day changes to night.

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