The Day Breaks In The East Comments
The day breaks in the east
The thin ray of light passes
Though the wall of cold mist
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This is a beautiful poem replete with imagery! My favorite lines: The bees appear one by one/To hover over opening buds as/The lone star dies on the horizon.....! Appreciated the way you have expressed the day break! (10)
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8/19/2025 1:39:52 PM # 1.0.0
Peace and love float in the air As smoke rises from the roofs And the priest chants a prayer.........haunting expression with nice theme. This is really a brilliant poem with nice inscription on day breaks. Thanks for sharing.10
Thanks for wonderful comment Sir and full rating. Regards.