Saturday, November 23, 2013

The Day... Comments

Rating: 4.5

The Day was like any other
Cold in winter, with a hint of snow

I sat on a computer while staring
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Michelle Hanes
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Khairul Ahsan 25 December 2013

A well written poem. 'I dreaded having to go in there But I knew I had to go through that door' Many children have dreadful experience of their school, which ideally should be a place that they enjoy and look forward to going. 'The meanies and bullies had taken over Over, wherever they would lurk' This is a menacing experience.

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Michelle Hanes

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