Friday, September 18, 2009

The Day Comments

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The day you appeared that
was the day i lost my heart
to you.........to love..............to us
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Jewel Workman
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 18 September 2009

good one but in the 3rd line from the last 'and my last days to be wit you' should be 'and my last days to be with you' over all----- good!

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