Friday, May 15, 2020

The Dawning Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wiping the darkness deep
Touches the rays so steep
Peeping through the window
Enlightening the glow.
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Varsha M
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Rebecca Navarre 04 July 2021

As I look to the brilliant sun Transforming from red to yellow bun! .. The dawning sun inspiring beauty and hope in ever so many ways! ... An excellent write! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 May 2020

A wonderfully penned poem. Simply fantastic....10+++

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Varsha M 17 May 2020

Thank-you sir for admirations.

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