Friday, April 16, 2010

The Dawning Comments

Rating: ★3.1

Ah! what time wilt Thou come? when shall that cry,
'The bridegroom's coming,' fill the sky?
Shall it in the evening run,
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Henry Vaughan
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David Stewart 23 January 2016

Several lines have been left out of the text of this poem, spoiling the sense and the rhyme scheme. You should be able to fit in: All now are stirring, ev'ry field and Sleepie Planets set, and slumber, Line 4 should end with the word done.

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Brian Jani 03 May 2014

What can I say....Bravo.

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Henry Vaughan

Henry Vaughan

Brecknockshire, Wales
Henry Vaughan
Henry Vaughan
Brecknockshire, Wales
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