Thursday, August 22, 2019

The Dawn When Turns To Morn Comments

Rating: 4.7

Yon there, the charioteer of Sun
Heralds the arrival of dawn,
Seen dawning her demur more smiles
That spread on to far spatial miles.
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Aniruddha Pathak
sun
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 August 2020

The wonders of an early dawn have been painted vividly and magnificently on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

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Anjandev Roy 16 March 2020

Such a wonderful write! anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 March 2020

Thanks for visiting and liking it.

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2020

" Name அரூண generally means Mythical charioteer of the sun or Dawn, is of Sanskrit, Indian origin" " Aruna" is " the name of the charioteer of Surya (Sun god) in Hinduism. He is the personification of the reddish glow of the rising Sun." I'm confused. Is Aruna the same as " dawn" ? No, i think not. One is male and one female. " " ? ? Did i hear mention of? Not a guy's, i hope. bri :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 January 2020

, I had explained in detail and then PH removed it all saying it is too long.... But why remove it altogether? Well, in short, Aruna is not to be pronounced like Arunaa. In Sanskrit each consonant need 'a' vowel a to make it complete. Name அரூண, does it mean Arun in Odia?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2019

A fabulous poem with great rhythm and rhyme sir! I sincerely admire the fathomless poetic beauty of this magnificent piece of work.... Full marks!

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 December 2019

Such generous comments, beyond my belief, thank you so much Dr Swain.

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Chinedu Dike 01 November 2019

Your diction is a complete plet delight. Beautiful poem nicely put together. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 November 2019

Thank you dear Chinnedu Dike for liking the poem and saying a few good words. Hope, I continue to deserve your appreciation.

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Archita Kumar 07 October 2019

Approaching, slipping closer abreast, And losing her self as a dawn She merges— one with the sun. Her pale orange radiance Emits golden red hues at once, And soon she's no more dawn, Ah she's a young lady called morn Thank you for sharing a poem like this.Such a lovely poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 October 2019

The joy is mine when a poet like you reads the poem and likes it. Thank you indeed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2019

Dawn is my favorite part of the day. Its beauty is magical. The play of colors is indeed breathtaking. A beautiful poem well written with superb imagery.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

I agree, my preferred time as well and it is indeed very rejuvenating. Thanks so much.

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Anjandev Roy 17 September 2019

she's a young lady called morn........fine. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Yes, the shy damsel slowly transforms into a young lady called morn. Thanks you so much.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 August 2019

A pleasant face! ! To embrace Nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

You're right, we embrace nature and the natural phenomenae embrace each other. Thanks a lot.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2019

Ever so slowly baring her Approaching, slipping closer abreast, And losing her self as a dawn She merges— one with the sun. what an imagination and expressions.. just so fine my dear Aniruddha.. thank u. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

Hi Dr Tony Brahmin, thank you so much. The poets and readers here on PH seems to be quite love and romance lovers.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 August 2019

How dawn is turning to morn has been so hauntingly delineated. I want to cite....Ever so slowly baring her / Approaching, slipping closer abreast, / And losing her self as a dawn / She merges— one with the sun. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

Thank you so much such nice words, and rating as well, dear KM.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 August 2019

A dawn is in love of a morn, a poetic idea so nicely materialized in a poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

Thank you dear AJ, beauty and butterflies, love and longing, and the like is generally not my style, but yes sometimes. But I think this genre is appreciated more here on PH.

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Valsa George 22 August 2019

The arrival of the dawn is imaginatively pictured as a bride shyly approaching her groom! Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

Thank you dear poet/reader, your appreciation is appreciated.

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2020

Valsa must have gotten an invitation to the wedding. i did NOT, and i don't 'see' it coming in the poem. well, good luck to them anyway. bri :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 August 2019

beauty of the early dawn bring the divine morn though not lovelorn I am yet, love detains me in beauty's jam!

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 August 2019

So, dawn makes your poetic juices flow and you get romantic as well. One more beauty of an early dawn. Thank you dear MB.

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