Friday, June 7, 2013

The Dawn's Air Comments

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By the dawn's moist air I wake to see,
All that made in a divine fantasy.
Though my eyes can't peer further the fence;
Nor far than Tigris's flowing clarity,
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Hamza Al Saieedy
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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 09 August 2013

A sweet narration.If you don't mind substitute Divine fantasy in to divine design/ scheme as you please for better inner meaning. Divine Power does not fancy but plan.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 June 2013

take and listen life's lesson, good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Hamza Al Saieedy

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