Wednesday, February 17, 2010

The Dawn Of Night Comments

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Looking at the window,
one starry night,
I see the moon rise up,
and the sun sleep,
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Allan Angelo Celestino
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Gertrude Morris 17 February 2010

A lovely poem. Descriptive, yet not overly. Twists and turns of the poem leave readers wondering. Nicely done.

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