Monday, April 8, 2019

The Dawn Misses The Goddess Comments

Rating: 5.0

She never wakes up with a pink aurora dawn,
Birds practising a welcome song, waving brims
The winds adding music playing on a blue guitar,
Look now tired and slowly losing their whims.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 April 2019

Despite your creative original poetry they push you down from 16 to 17 and keep me pressed down from 5 to 12 o what a competitive poetic PH THE WORLD GLOBAL WARMING HAVE YOU JA ji HEARD

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 April 2019

O Goddess Aurora Look- never I come to worship you; yes, I never get up early for you but here, in this world every parts of creation enjoys Your shining with birds chirping, with melodious tune of rivers stream, with rejoicing of trees nodding their leaves, with suave flowing of breeze, with sweetest touching of morning sunlight O' Goddess Aurora You are beautiful truly that's why this world of the morning is looking so beautiful...//

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