Tuesday, July 29, 2008

The Dawn Is Yours... Comments

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Lurking shadows, shifting light
What is it that you try to hide?
Layer upon layer, pretenses plied
Reasons decried, living in blight
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Meena Iyer
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Sathyanarayana M V S 30 July 2008

Yes! ! Dawn is all yours! You are future hope! ! ! You are destined to hearten more hearts with your beautiful poems. My poem SUPPRESSED TRUTH is somehow similar; but not as crisp and as nice as this...and the title, ...GREAT! sathya narayana

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Nik Morgan 29 July 2008

Stirring stuff full of pride and commitment, A very good write Thanks Ivor

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