Friday, December 21, 2012

The Dawn Is Nigh Comments

Rating: 4.7

This night sleepless, long and dark
And the inverted bowl we call the sky

Filled with stars yet darkness prevails
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Waheed Khan
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Vijay Sai R 26 December 2012

a refreshing poem...well written

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Kasia Fedyk 24 December 2012

Beautiful poem Waheed! the duality, how preciously expressed the sides of the human soul and its journey and now we step fully into the arms of faith, Light! beautiful! Thank you.

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Howard Johnson 24 December 2012

Excellant last stanza, thanks for sharing!

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Aimanu Begum 21 December 2012

Loved the play of words and thoughts and the use of the images signifying suffering and hope.

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