Wednesday, January 21, 2009

The Dawn And The Dusk Comments

Rating: 3.4

Beyond this dawn is the light of the morning,
before dusk, the songs of the evening,
between the dawn and the dusk, my love,
in the blue hour, my wait for you complete,
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Reshma Ramesh
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rago rago 10 February 2009

lively lyric where did u get radiant momentum dear reshma....9+

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Srujini M 03 February 2009

a love poem wherein reshma discovers her lover and sweet memories associated with him in every lyrical and musical aspect of nature from dawn to dusk.

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Alison Cassidy 28 January 2009

This is a beautifully romantic poem about love and longing and the mystery of dawn and dusk. There is a strong spiritual connection in your words of devotion and a fascinating mix of the more lyrical and the more colloquial. 'I gather you ain't gonna com' seemed out of place at first, but on reflection, fits in perfectly to the whole piece. Such a delightful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Josephine J.W 26 January 2009

Another interesting and captivating description of these two opposites...the beginning and the ending of our day...

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Vaibhav Pandey 21 January 2009

quite interesting........ well penned

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Indira Babbellapati 21 January 2009

that's a peculiar and unique state of mind that u've described...only the one who experiences will know it!

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what a wonderful poem a ten for me, . KRISTA

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 January 2009

You are lost in the drunk gaze of the horizons when the skies meet the earth, , another superb composition, , Reshma, , a 10 from me

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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