Friday, July 24, 2020

The Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tree was flowering the waist of every twig at dawn
Sun shined it with golden ray through fawned eyes lawn
After morning bath you came to pluck some of it
No one was there but from the roof silent I greeted
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Anjandev Roy 29 July 2020

This is a remarkable piece......thank u, dear poet....anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 29 July 2020

This is an impeccable write.......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2020

Dawn! ! ! Like a peaceful lawn; With the harmony of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2020

No one was there but from the roof silent I greeted Black hair, red vermilion, smiling body and creed were u trying to a sonnet for her breed 14 lines ababcdcdefef gg==14 lins only ur MB OF BD are stll lovolly

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2020

A wonderfully executed poem. Simply marvelous....10++

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M Asim Nehal 24 July 2020

I see marvellous images in your amusing poem, morning time when sun is about to start the journey and the bird'c chirping, warming up by the animals creates symphony the fragrance of flowers, and life begins for another day.10+

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Varsha M 24 July 2020

Very true. The flower hymn the beauty dawn true. Beautiful words. Beautiful description of flowers collection.

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