The Dawn Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

The Dawn

Rating: 5.0


The tree was flowering the waist of every twig at dawn
Sun shined it with golden ray through fawned eyes lawn
After morning bath you came to pluck some of it
No one was there but from the roof silent I greeted
Black hair, red vermilion, smiling body and creed
The tender hands touched the flowers lovingly in need
The basket of oblation became full of charming
Holiness before the God brought the scent of spring
Hymn from the scripture and the bell reminded the tree
That served self to make alive the belief how wonderfully

Whose garden, whose flowers were there still I do not know
But flowers for solemn hymn the beauty starts the dawn true


22.07.2020 Chattogram

Friday, July 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beginning,dawn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 24 July 2020

Very true. The flower hymn the beauty dawn true. Beautiful words. Beautiful description of flowers collection.

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M Asim Nehal 24 July 2020

I see marvellous images in your amusing poem, morning time when sun is about to start the journey and the bird'c chirping, warming up by the animals creates symphony the fragrance of flowers, and life begins for another day.10+

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Anjandev Roy 29 July 2020

This is a remarkable piece......thank u, dear poet....anjandev roy.

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Anjandev Roy 29 July 2020

This is an impeccable write.......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 July 2020

Dawn! ! ! Like a peaceful lawn; With the harmony of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2020

No one was there but from the roof silent I greeted Black hair, red vermilion, smiling body and creed were u trying to a sonnet for her breed 14 lines ababcdcdefef gg==14 lins only ur MB OF BD are stll lovolly

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2020

A wonderfully executed poem. Simply marvelous....10++

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