Friday, March 22, 2019

The Dawn Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let the sweet sun rays
Kiss me
Till I walk in the morning
In the village paths
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dipak adhya
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Hazel Durham 03 April 2019

Stunning write as the dawn fills us with an expectation of another new day the moon at night is a reminder to reflect on our journey and to fill our lives with a deep meaning to love and to love! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 March 2019

Dawn and night, the main manifestations created by nature for nurturing life and preserving it, have been beautifully explored through this beautiful verse. Thanks for sharing.

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