Sunday, April 24, 2016

The Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the sun wakes
The heart wakes too
To the light of love
That flows gently
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Nosheen Irfan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 August 2022

Simply, it's a fabulous poem. Top score.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2016

Between you and me. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Edmund Strolis 01 May 2016

Shadows are buried leaving the light unhindered, finally. Allowed at last to float and flow, found everywhere. The butterfly's laced wings, the sunshine golden in our palms. Beautiful, hopeful, celebratory writing. A treasure to read. Bridging the distance so marvelously.

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Valsa George 27 April 2016

Dawn is here Shadows are buried In the darkness Awake! Inspiring and invigorating exhortation!

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 April 2016

It's the dawn, a new dawn Created from a thousand tears Of the last night Touch the grass with your feet Sip the dew from fresh leaves Chase the love......... beautiful nature poem.. i loved these images. it touches the heart......... if flows from your pen. thank you dear poetess, Noscheen. God bless you. tony

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Barry Middleton 24 April 2016

What a lovely poem about dawn and its associated feelings. I am reading as the sun rises here in Florida. Thank you for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2016

A poem with an amazing flow and full of love and care. The morning brings peace to the earth and with that one feels drawn to the loved ones. Liked it.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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