Tuesday, June 19, 2012

The Dawn … 1906-2k12 Comments

Rating: 4.7

Oh! Come, my friend!
hop this ledge of borrowed time!
Let's do the stars, not blink at life
Nor lose forays to silent winks, that
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Yasmin Khan 28 April 2013

Pure imagination soaring on the wings of poesy, It can take everyone with it, Magnifique! Wonderful imagery

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Walterrean Salley 04 August 2012

Love nature, especially the dawn. Beautiful poem with great images. Good job.

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Annie Ali 15 July 2012

beautiful Poem... reminding me of my own shades i saw in mornings and how i reconnected with every soul responding to me... even a blade of grass... superb poem

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Amy Marie 06 July 2012

I love the beginning, especially the third line. This poem reminds me of how good it can feel to step outside in the early morning :)

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Linda Ori 02 July 2012

Ah, wish we could but have the time to pursue such fancies as this! Wonderfully colorful imagery, filled with pure magic. The stuff that dreams are made of......a delightful read, Saadat.

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Valerie Dohren 01 July 2012

Beautifully penned, very imaginative.

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Gillena Cox 29 June 2012

lovely ode to dawn and metaphor of beginnings

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 June 2012

I've read this again. Great.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2012

I enjoyed this lovely piece.

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Christina Venter 26 June 2012

Very beautiful. I like this poem. Well done Saadat

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Indira Babbellapati 24 June 2012

let's go and see the moonlit sky, to shake the limbs of frozen trees soar with the birds and hum with the bees. let's go and steal the rising sun absorb the bracing rays as one Oh, come my friend ------ :) WOW, DOCTOR!

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Shahzia Batool 20 June 2012

Thanks for the credit! ! ! The sunset & sunrise both are equally the wonderful scenes of Nature...See how Keats describes the scene: .......................His palace bright Bastioned with pyramids of glowing gold, And touch'd with shade of bronzed obelisks, Glar'd a blood-red through all it's thousand courts, Arches and domes, and fiery galleries: And all its curtains of Aurorian clouds Flush'd angerly.... The Dawn is a beautiful nature poem on your credit...

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Unknown Destination 20 June 2012

I am always inspired by the power of your words and magic you create with them. Almost all of your poems are very well written with great imagery and message. Yes, The dawn is very thought provoking poem.It is hope of a new day; forgetting past regrets and getting maximum before it's too late with minimal time in hand. And the loveliest thing of this poem is, that there is no escape from unpleasant reality but an enthusiasm to capture the happy moments with different angle and mode of thinking while living in same circumstances along with your dear one.

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