Oh! Come, my friend!
hop this ledge of borrowed time!
Let's do the stars, not blink at life
Nor lose forays to silent winks, that
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Love nature, especially the dawn. Beautiful poem with great images. Good job.
beautiful Poem... reminding me of my own shades i saw in mornings and how i reconnected with every soul responding to me... even a blade of grass... superb poem
I love the beginning, especially the third line. This poem reminds me of how good it can feel to step outside in the early morning :)
Ah, wish we could but have the time to pursue such fancies as this! Wonderfully colorful imagery, filled with pure magic. The stuff that dreams are made of......a delightful read, Saadat.
let's go and see the moonlit sky, to shake the limbs of frozen trees soar with the birds and hum with the bees. let's go and steal the rising sun absorb the bracing rays as one Oh, come my friend ------ :) WOW, DOCTOR!
Thanks for the credit! ! ! The sunset & sunrise both are equally the wonderful scenes of Nature...See how Keats describes the scene: .......................His palace bright Bastioned with pyramids of glowing gold, And touch'd with shade of bronzed obelisks, Glar'd a blood-red through all it's thousand courts, Arches and domes, and fiery galleries: And all its curtains of Aurorian clouds Flush'd angerly.... The Dawn is a beautiful nature poem on your credit...
I am always inspired by the power of your words and magic you create with them. Almost all of your poems are very well written with great imagery and message. Yes, The dawn is very thought provoking poem.It is hope of a new day; forgetting past regrets and getting maximum before it's too late with minimal time in hand. And the loveliest thing of this poem is, that there is no escape from unpleasant reality but an enthusiasm to capture the happy moments with different angle and mode of thinking while living in same circumstances along with your dear one.
Pure imagination soaring on the wings of poesy, It can take everyone with it, Magnifique! Wonderful imagery