Wednesday, July 29, 2009

The Dawn Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The dawn caught me this sad
and noticed that I feel bad.
The dawn tried to entertained me
but be happy is what I can't be.
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rhona fabi
Goodbye
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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

remarkable simile well implied...a good poem...10

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Ramesh T A 01 August 2009

The dawn of your poetry has begun well! Nice to read!

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Nikunj Sharma 31 July 2009

Simple and stimulating..that's work of a young poetess.. Keep it up

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