The Date (Part 2) Comments

Dee, I am thinking that he has a little time, as long as the wife is not named Buffy!

I really loved it too. You set me up and got me with the first bite.

HAHAHAHA ...waitasecond...do i smell...GARLIC...? loved it eni da kid

Laughing.. you clever, talented trickster! These two pieces have been wonderful to read. Trick or treat? t x

This was great fun, Dee. If only he had worn protection (at least around his neck) . -chuck

Excellent poem Dee, I didn't read the first part. I will have to find the first part of this. This was great and intense. Take care.

The playful little nip just under the ear...that was a bit of a clue! Loved it, though, and the eerie ending when he couldn't see his reflection in the mirror. A great Halloween poem, Dee. Please write some more.....it will be Christmas soon, hint, hint... Love, Fran xxx

Guilt has a way of expressing, does not need a reflection.......nice write.......