Friday, October 20, 2006

The Date (Part 1) Comments

Rating: 5.0

What on earth had he been thinking?
A blind date at his age?
He should have picked
A different night than Halloween
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Ebone' Ingram 04 January 2007

loving it...and going to read part 2! eni da kid

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Well, I'm smiling and bowled over by another talent-packed piece from you, Dee. And thereis another there, and I want to and am going to move on immediately. You besotting poet! t x

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Chuck Audette 20 October 2006

Oops, I read part 1 after part 2. But Part 2 stands well on it's own, no worries. -chuck

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Ruby Root 20 October 2006

Excellent poem Dee, I found the first part as you can see. It is great. I love the mystery. It was a fun read. Take care.

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Geoff Warden 20 October 2006

Sohow many parts shall we await! like where this is leading Dee...ah but will there be a twist, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Francesca Johnson 20 October 2006

The start of another of your epic series, Dee....bit of a cliffhanger here, making me want to know more...who is she? ....what is going on? .....what happens next? .... Can't wait for the next part. Love, Fran xxx

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