Friday, July 8, 2011

The Date And Time Comments

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the date and time
spray painted up on the clock on the wall
once you get far enough up the ladder
you are bound
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D.J. Ray
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Shadow Girl 02 September 2011

You have portrayed a powerful image in a few words..very skillful. Fantastic writing. SG

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in very few words you say alot. i can relate to trhis poem. i really like it. keep it up. i enjoy every piuce you write. i can relate anfd understand it in one way or another. nice job! :)

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2011

I read this twice, and i smile guess i get something :) Nice write though! :) _Unwritten Soul

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D.J. Ray

D.J. Ray

Jonesboro AR
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